Looking For Part-Time Work
Hi my name is Darryl Saunders and I am 16 years old.
I love cars and am looking to get some part-time work geared around cars or motorcycles. I live near Erin Mills and Dundas |
here's my suggestion. make an email like darryl.saunders@hotmail.com ; its more professional that way instead of nascarmanic@....
oh, and spell/grammer check your resume and dont include stuff like i gathered pucks :retard: it doesnt make the task look good or whatever not being a dick, but employers like it when they see stuff like this. |
That is a horrible resume.
This must be a joke, if not, then you should return to grade six. |
Ya thanks for the bad criticism because it has showed me i displayed my "rough copy"
P.s. could u delete the first 2 post by drift and shift and super adam |
i don't believe your 80% average.....that has to be the worst resume i have seen .............a student who gets 80% should have a better resume. For now ...go to McD's
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Originally Posted by nascarmaniac
Hi my name is Darryl Saunders and I am 16 years old.
I love cars and am looking to get some part-time geared around cars or motorcycles. I'm thinking of an open spot I know of that might fit your abilities... Do you already own your own squeegee and bucket? |
Ya I know i have absolutely no work experience is that what u mean by horrible resume?
Y don't u guys help me out? suggestions vs. just bad this can be changed into a help page sorta speak.
Originally Posted by gldwngr
I'm thinking of an open spot I know of that might fit your abilities...
Do you already own your own squeegee and bucket? yes I wash my own dirt bike, and my family's cars all the time |
Originally Posted by gldwngr
I'm thinking of an open spot I know of that might fit your abilities...
Do you already own your own squeegee and bucket? |
Originally Posted by nascarmaniac
Hi my name is Darryl Saunders and I am 16 years old.
I love cars and am looking to get some part-time work geared around cars or motorcycles. Realistically, you have no apparent skills to speak of as far as cars and bikes go. Interest is a plus, but interest without industry-related accomplishments puts you at square one. The smaller shops probably won't be able to offer you anything, but you may have a chance at one of the bigger new car dealerships as a car washer, lot jockey and general gopher guy. From there you might be able to work up over time. But gopher guys are a dime a dozen. Be prepared to put in a lot of applications.
Originally Posted by nascarmaniac
yes I wash my own dirt bike, and my family's cars all the time
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in regards to skills should i include knowledge of tools? is that really a skill?
How bout the work I have done in auto shop at school, Ive worked on the tire machine, removed everything from radiator to alternator, catalytic converter, torn down an entire engine, hooked up a car to b e towed, balanced wheels. I completely forgot about auto shop it didn't make it into my resume. |
Originally Posted by nascarmaniac
in regards to skills should i include knowledge of tools? is that really a skill?
How bout the work I have done in auto shop at school, Ive worked on the tire machine, removed everything from radiator to alternator, catalytic converter, torn down an entire engine, hooked up a car to b e towed, balanced wheels. I completely forgot about auto shop it didn't make it into my resume. |
Originally Posted by nascarmaniac
in regards to skills should i include knowledge of tools? is that really a skill?
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is the "new" resume any better?
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Originally Posted by nascarmaniac
is the "new" resume any better?
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So what suggestions now?
Hey does anyone else have suggestions? |
go to a big shope become an apprentice... do work for free learn the job and then after a year or two of butt kissin u mit eget lucky n offered a paying job. At 16 no shop is gonna trust you let alone pay you to work on customers cars. If you ask to do an apprentice and wrok for free and just shadow a professional you can learn alot more and if you do an amazing job they will most likely keep you and start you on a pay roll.
either way good luck |
Ur Resume is Meh
Yo Darryl, your resume is pretty good but is also weak. I.E- ur attributes could use some improving and more detail. I fi can think of anything else I 'll repost .
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oh and
p.s. you are better off talkign straight up to a owner of a shop rather than just leaving ur resume there. The more persistent and annoying you are the more initiative you show the more u will stand out from teh other 1000 16 year olds who want to work on cars. |
i could have gotten u a job but most places u gonna need at least a g2 and be able to drive a manual car.
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3284 Hornbeam Cres.
Mississauga Phone (905) 820 7435 Darryl Saunders Objective To get a head start in the work force by maximizing my vacation time towards receiving experience and knowledge. Work experience Mississauga Girls Hockey League Assistant Hockey Coach Teaching Hockey Techniques and Strategies Organizing Game Dates Assisting in pre-game practice Displaying a positive and encouraging presence M.R.P.O.A Event Organizer Managing performance of annual regatta Organizing and distribution of supplies Performed many cleaning duties Education Present Erindale Secondary School Mississauga, Ontario Area’s of Interest Automechanics History Civilian Engineering Awards received Erindale History Award, 2005 & 2006 Citizenship Award, 3 Year Honor Roll student References Will be given upon request Darryl you dutch? In any case pm me your email and i'll send you the Word Resume Document you can edit or add more to. Seb P.S. Alot of people here don't seem to know how to create a Resume...whats the unemployed cracker ratio here?
Originally Posted by TurboH22Civic
go to a big shope become an apprentice... do work for free learn the job and then after a year or two of butt kissin u mit eget lucky n offered a paying job. At 16 no shop is gonna trust you let alone pay you to work on customers cars. If you ask to do an apprentice and wrok for free and just shadow a professional you can learn alot more and if you do an amazing job they will most likely keep you and start you on a pay roll.
either way good luck Seb |
Originally Posted by 3nidapooh
i could have gotten u a job but most places u gonna need at least a g2 and be able to drive a manual car.
I can drive manual but as of right now i only got g1 but by the end of march break i will have g2 |
Originally Posted by SuprAdam
That is a horrible resume.
Yeah it looks a lot like yours!!! :smokin: :smokin: :smokin: |
Originally Posted by B6T
Yeah it looks a lot like yours!!! :smokin: :smokin: :smokin:
lol :thumbsup: :smilie_da |
Originally Posted by Sebasano
Dude do you type with your hanging out? Seb |
Dud if you like to work on cars dont get a job in that field. Get a job that you like but you make good money, so you can afford to play around with cars. The pay you get isint that good, and after doing it for like 10-15 years or so your back and what ever els will be screwed over from looking up at cars all day, Most places have no benifits and im sure this list could go on and on. But for a summer job go for it. but at your age you wont get a job unless you know someone, you have to have a g2, drive stick, and youll just be washing cars and oil changes ect. Your best bet would be to co-op at a shop and maby they will hire you for the summer. But really right know your asking for something that you just cant do right know. no dealer ship will want to trust a 16 year old with a 20,000$$ car even if you have a g2, I know how it is i was at that point was just like you except i had a decent resume but anyways good luck
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Alright...i will stop being an ass......i was just like you , had no experience and wanted to work on cars. What do u do? at your school sign up for Co-op at a dealership. Once your in the dealership while doing Co-op work your ass of and show them your really good...and the just might hire you.....it sure as hell worked for me...............good luck
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1. this is the worst place to put ur resume
2. i hope you don't ever get serious into street racing now that everyone knows EVERYTHING about you 3. sry to say but that resume sounds pathetic man 4. so u dun't think i'm an ass, go apply at McDicks or Walmart, stick with it a few months, when you have experience make a new resume. |
Originally Posted by Young gun
1. this is the worst place to put ur resume
2. i hope you don't ever get serious into street racing now that everyone knows EVERYTHING about you I have though of apprenticship like mentioned but i dont actually what a career as a mechanic, just a part-time job/summerjob |
Originally Posted by nascarmaniac
help from professionals(ie: managers, ceos)
Seb |
Yo man, what you really need is a cover letter. Just a one page synopsis on why you want the job, your skills and contact info. THEN you put your resumé, I also suggest you segregate it. Have education in a different section. Also have things that relate to the job you are reply to. e.g work with cars, or took auto-shop....
Originally Posted by Sebasano
Ask them if there are any positions they can get you started on. Networks are a great resource for employment.
Seb |
way to dig up an old post
everything here is so bad and out of date the mods could delete it if they want |
No one said anything about a cover letter in the previous posts, Just tryin to help you out man.
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cover letter.. LOL
sounds like a way to waste time on a job you wont get.. err, speaking from experience. :veryhappy |
i know ur tryin to help but its an old THREAD is wat I meant
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