Need opinions on a buisness ad
 

I dont know if i ever mentioned here but my uncles owns a garage so he asked me what i think he should do to bring in more buisness, hes packed the way it is but hes allways lookin for more, but anyway i told him to make a flyer or an ad or somethin and he came up with the pic below, do you think it will work? And if anyone wants to make one up or improve on this one it would be cool if someone could whip one up with f-bodys on it.

Looks good butt with the women on there you could always offend people who will now go out of their way not to take their car's there. Hey it happens all the time.

For some reason I want Burger King now.

What Chad said. Women are going to see that as degrading and not want to take their cars there. And we all know chicks tell people where to go or not to go.

Yea i agree that might offend people, if somone could make one with some of the f-body's from on the site if yous dont mind. Hes specializes in electical but he does everything, hes allso the only garage in town that does performance work mostly. and he paints he worked at a gm dealer for 10 years in the paint department but he only paints cars that come in for collision repair. hes the one thats painting my car :p so lets just say i work there and help him out when hes busy and i have myself a new paintjob

the only things I see that would be bad on it are the women and it is a little busy, with all the different warping on the letters and such.

Not that guys won't enjoy lookin at the women, it almost looks like a cover for a porn store.

I would say ditch the chicks and place some pics of performance parts and possibly vendors that he sells.

I'm not that good with that sort of thing or else I would be glad to help ya out..

Do you want to make one you think would be suitable? i like the work you do with PS. Just askin no biggy if your busy.

Show me that business card in person and I would not even consider stopping by that place.

I started working on it right after I posted. ;)

A good flyer should be simple in design and not have too much graphics/color so as not to distract form the information that is is providinf. I tried to keep it simple, but give it some color, and a little flash to draw the eye. I have a bigger version saved on my comouter if you want that. If you like it tell me, cause I need to add a space between the 'or' and the phone number.

Yea i like that looks sweet danielle, ill send you a pm with my email to send it too whenever you finish whatever else you think would work well with it.

I'll send you the other copy on Wed. most likely. Its not on this computer. It's on my Dad's.

Allright no rush, im not goin to be on here much because i have mad finals all this week, i cant wait for next wensday.. spring break starts yay

Camaro 94.. NICE job.It looks real good to me :)

thanks